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The reader finds out that the body discovered belongs to Emilio Strauss. From the conversation Officer Spradlin is having with the dispatchers, it should be clear that this isn't any "ordinary" citizen.

I have been very lavish in my praise for things in Dark Fringe that work really well to me. In this case, however, I think my lettering failed to properly add gravity to the statements made by Spradlin to the dispatcher. Of course, when I was originally doing the lettering it seemed fine, but now, given a bit of time...

I guess the fact that the dialogue seems detached from the panel irks me, as well as the pathetically small word balloon at the end which circles the word "Positive". If I were to do it again (and I just might! ;-), I would make it larger, more visible.